Writing Out Loud, Part 2: How to Use Color in Your Non-Fiction Writing to Better Engage Your Reader
When it comes to writing non-fiction—which includes blogging—too much of what I read is flat and colorless. Our Western minds governed by math and sequential logic concern ourselves too much with the structure of our arguments that we neglect the story-telling aspect of writing.
As writers, we must always remember that the best way to engage a reader is to engage their imagination. It’s been that way since we were children when we could get lost for hours playing with little toys because we inserted ourselves into the story we were creating. That’s the power of the visual aspects of our minds, and the more you write for the eyes of the mind, the greater chance you have of keeping the reader’s interest.
If You Can Captivate the Imagination, You Will Own Your Readers
This principle came home to me during a season in my son’s life when he and I were discussing the best way for him to prepare for a career in filmmaking. As much as he loved to study film and television, he was not interested in attending film school. He had studied film all his life, and he didn’t see the need to invest the time and money in a curriculum when he could be working hands on.
As an entrepreneur myself, I supported his decision to take a risk, but we did discuss the unique skill utilized by novelists as a means to better story-telling. In other words, I challenged him to study the creativity imposed on novelists because they don’t have the visual tools of filmmakers to easily engage their readers.
I told my son, “Think of the minute distance between a person’s physical eye and their brain. It’s barely a couple of inches, yet that small distance amounts to millions of dollars in production expense if you want to entertain someone.” In other words, to engage someone through their physical eyes requires scripts, actors, production crews, locations, sets, distribution, etc. The costs involved in filmmaking are enormous.
However, if you focus on engaging the “eyes of the mind” through the written word, then you only have to fill the “inner-screen” of the imagination in order to captivate someone. Instead of investing millions of dollars in special effects, you can create a similar experience by using a reader’s imagination through effective description—or “coloring”—in your prose.
How I Add Color to My Writing
It doesn’t require much to add coloring to your non-fiction writing. In fact, you don’t want to go overboard with this and actually try to sound like a novelist. If you do, your writing will scream, “technique,” and that will immediately discredit you.
I add subtle coloring to my writing to make my prose more engaging. Of course, writing articles and blog posts for my Metal Motivation project affords me even more opportunity for this because you expect colorful language in heavy metal. Here’s a sample of mine from a book I’m writing. This brief section on personal power is subtitled “You Sold Your Soul”:
Why haven’t you experienced more of your dominant side? It’s because you lack the deep sense of desperation that releases your ascendant self. It’s because your personal power is stifled by the sense of satisfaction with the way things are. It’s your compromise with life that entraps you. It’s your negotiation with mediocrity that limits you. It’s your settlement with hell itself to withhold your personal power in exchange for a life without risk, struggle, or sacrifice.
You might be existing on the bare edges of the next paycheck, but it’s enough for you. You might be dragging your heels to a job you don’t like, but you’ll endure the senseless boredom so long as you’re supplied with enough for rent and groceries. You sold your soul, but it wasn’t for rock and roll. You sold it to silence the beckoning voice that’s calling you to something greater.
Well, I’m here to tear up that contract, and this book is my rude intrusion into your world to create greater dissatisfaction with the way things are. My goal is to ignite your intensity, fan to flame your resolve, and increase your hunger to the level of a dog-like determination. My objective is to make you a rabid beast when it comes to changing your life, renewing your thinking, and maximizing your resources.
This is the only way to release your inner-strength. There is no magic to the process, but something does need to go off in you. A trigger needs to pulled. A bomb needs to be ignited. Something has to light the fuse that enrages you to war against the part of you that holds you back. You need a new slave master. You must become a power slave. You must submit yourself to your dominant side.
How do I do this? I do it the same way as I mentioned in the first part of this series: I write out loud. I am constantly writing a sentence or two and then reading them out loud with feeling. If the descriptives appeal to my visual sensibilities, then I know it will do so with my reader. And even though you can now tell what I’m doing in the above example, the coloring I added is not overbearing. It’s just enough to keep someone reading.
Writing out loud also gives me the feel for the length of sentences; where the stress points should be, and where to make my paragraph breaks—that’s what I described in my previous article on rhythm. Effective rhythm and subtle coloring combine to carry your reader through what could easily be a flat and lifeless piece of non-fiction. If you take some time to master the use of rhythm and coloring, you’ll not only better engage your audience, you’ll have a hell of a lot more fun writing. That will lead to more output, and you’ll soon become prolific and popular.
Write out loud!









